Fix wording.

bounce-rs · May 1, 2022 · d45a104 · d45a104
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diff --git a/book-src/core-api.md b/book-src/core-api.md
@@ -150,15 +150,16 @@ html! {
 
 ### Selector
 
-A derived state. Unlike Atoms or Slices, a selector cannot store any
-value. It derives its value from other states (atoms, slices or
+A derived state. Unlike Atoms or Slices, a selector does not store any
+value in itself. It derives its value from other states (atoms, slices or
 other selectors) and subscribes to the state used to derive values
 so it will update its value when any value it
 subscribes to changes automatically.
 
 #### Example
 
-A selector that checks if the pervious counter slice is even.
+A selector that checks if the counter slice defined in the previous
+example is even.
 
 ```rust
 #[derive(PartialEq)]
@@ -202,8 +203,6 @@ API Reference:
 
 An action that can be applied to multiple states.
 
-A notion can be any type that is `'static`.
-
 When a notion is applied, it will be broadcasted to all states that
 listen to this notion.
 
@@ -321,7 +320,7 @@ API Reference:
 
 The Future Notion API is a low-level API to execute asynchronous tasks.
 
-If you are trying to interact with a backend API,
+If you want to interact with an API,
 it is recommended to use the [Query API](query-api.md) instead.
 
 The Query API is built with the Future Notion API.

diff --git a/book-src/tutorial.md b/book-src/tutorial.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # Tutorial
 
-This tutorial will guide you through to create a simple application that
+This tutorial will guide you to create a simple application that
 greets the user with the entered name.
 
 ## 0. Prerequisites
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ You need the following tools:
 1. [Rust](https://rustup.rs/) with `wasm32-unknown-unknown` target toolchain
 
    If you installed Rust with rustup, You can obtain the
-`wasm32-unknown-unknown` target with the following command:
+`wasm32-unknown-unknown` target toolchain with the following command:
 
    ```shell
    rustup target add wasm32-unknown-unknown
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ You need the following tools:
 
 This tutorial uses the `yew-trunk-minimal-template`.
 This template repository has a minimal setup of Yew with Trunk.
-You can a new repository using the template with the following commands:
+You can create a new repository using the template with the following commands:
 
 ```shell
 mkdir my-first-bounce-app

diff --git a/book.toml b/book.toml
@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
 [book]
-authors = ["Kaede Hoshikawa"]
 language = "en"
 multilingual = false
 src = "book-src"