Sharks - Jeannie Z. & Juli T. #15

jterapin · 2022-04-26T20:18:29Z

Completed Wave 1 & 2.

audreyandoy

Part 1 looks great! 👍

audreyandoy · 2022-04-28T06:59:52Z

app/__init__.py

+    from .routes import planet_bp
+    app.register_blueprint(planet_bp)


👍 Looks good! We can also move this file into a routes folder which would change the path of this import.

audreyandoy · 2022-04-28T07:00:11Z

app/routes.py

+class Planet:
+    def __init__(self, id, name, description, distance_from_earth):
+        self.id = id
+        self.name = name
+        self.description = description
+        self.distance_from_earth = distance_from_earth
+
+    def to_json(self):
+        return {
+                "id": self.id,
+                "name": self.name,
+                "description": self.description,
+                "Distance from Earth": self.distance_from_earth
+            }


👍 Good work!

audreyandoy · 2022-04-28T07:00:56Z

app/routes.py

+planets = [
+    Planet(1, "Mars", "Next livable planet", "131.48 million mi"),
+    Planet(2, "Mercury", "Smallest planet", "94.025 million mi"),
+    Planet(3, "Earth", "We live here, slowly dying", "0.0 million mi")


Lol the description... 🤣 😭

audreyandoy · 2022-04-28T07:02:42Z

app/routes.py

+def get_planets():
+    planets_response = []
+    for planet in planets:
+        planets_response.append(
+            {
+                "id": planet.id,
+                "name": planet.name,
+                "description": planet.description,
+                "Distance from Earth": planet.distance_from_earth
+            })
+    return jsonify(planets_response)


This is a good place to use the to_json() helper method from the Planet class:

def get_planets(): planets_response = [] for planet in planets: planets_response.append(planet.to_json()) return jsonify(planets_response)

We can also use list comprehension to build planets_response.

audreyandoy · 2022-04-28T07:04:57Z

app/routes.py

+def validate_planet(planet_id):
+    try:
+        planet_id = int(planet_id)
+    except:
+        return abort(make_response({"message": f"planet {planet_id} is invaild"}, 400))
+
+    for planet in planets:
+        if planet.id == planet_id:
+            return planet
+    return abort(make_response({"message": f"planet {planet_id} does not exist"}, 404))


The validation for detecting bad ids and ids with no record looks good!

audreyandoy · 2022-04-28T07:05:12Z

app/routes.py

+@planet_bp.route("/<planet_id>", methods=["GET"])
+def get_one_planet(planet_id):
+    planet = validate_planet(planet_id)
+    return jsonify(planet.to_json(), 200)


👍 nice use of the helper method!

audreyandoy

Jeannie and Julie! Great work in finishing solar system. I have added comments on small ways to improve the API.

🦈 ✨

audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:20:40Z

app/__init__.py

+from flask_sqlalchemy import SQLAlchemy
+from flask_migrate import Migrate
+from dotenv import load_dotenv
+import os
+
+
+db = SQLAlchemy()
+migrate = Migrate()
+load_dotenv()


 def create_app(test_config=None):
    app = Flask(__name__)

+
+    app.config['SQLALCHEMY_TRACK_MODIFICATIONS'] = False
+    if not test_config:
+        app.config['SQLALCHEMY_DATABASE_URI'] = os.environ.get(
+            "SQLALCHEMY_DATABASE_URI")
+    else:
+        app.config["TESTING"] = True
+        app.config["SQLALCHEMY_DATABASE_URI"] = os.environ.get(
+            "SQLALCHEMY_TEST_DATABASE_URI")
+
+    db.init_app(app)
+    migrate.init_app(app, db)
+    from app.models.planet import Planet
+
+    from .routes.planet_routes import planet_bp
+    app.register_blueprint(planet_bp)


👍 Good work in setting up the Flask app!

audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:21:28Z

app/models/planet.py

+    name = db.Column(db.String)
+    description = db.Column(db.String)
+    color = db.Column(db.String)


Should we be able to make planets with no name? To prevent our API from creating a planet with a null name, we can set that column to nullable = False.

name = db.Column(db.String, nullable=False)

audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:21:51Z

app/models/planet.py

+    def to_json(self):
+        return {
+            "id": self.id,
+            "name": self.name,
+            "description": self.description,
+            "color": self.color
+        }
+
+    def update(self, request_body):
+        self.name = request_body["name"]
+        self.description = request_body["description"]
+        self.color = request_body["color"]
+
+    @classmethod
+    def create(cls, request_body):
+        new_planet = cls(
+            name=request_body['name'],
+            description=request_body['description'],
+            color=request_body['color']
+        )
+        return new_planet


Nice use of helper methods and a class method!

audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:23:40Z

app/routes/helpers.py

+def validate_planet(planet_id):
+    try:
+        planet_id = int(planet_id)
+    except:
+        return abort(make_response(jsonify(f"Planet {planet_id} is invalid"), 400))
+
+    planet = Planet.query.get(planet_id)
+
+    if not planet:
+        return abort(make_response(jsonify(f"Planet {planet_id} does not exist"), 404))
+    return planet


Helpers look great! 👍 We may want to consider making the validation code as generic as possible to utilize any class and id or renaming this file to helper_planet_routes or planet_routes_helper. Either would be helpful if we expand this project to validate other objects like moons, suns, etc.

A more generic validation helper method would look like:

from flask import make_response, abort def validate_object(cls, id): try: id = int(id) except: return abort(make_response({"message": f"{cls} {id} is invalid"}, 400)) obj = cls.query.get(id) if not obj: abort(make_response({"message": f"{cls} {id} not found"},404)) return obj

audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:24:47Z

app/routes/planet_routes.py

+@planet_bp.route("", methods=["POST"])
+def create_planet():
+    request_body = request.get_json()
+
+    new_planet = Planet.create(request_body)
+
+    db.session.add(new_planet)
+    db.session.commit()
+
+    return make_response(jsonify(f"Planet {new_planet.name} has been created"), 201)


jsonify() is sufficient enough to generate a Response object

@planet_bp.route("", methods=["POST"]) def create_planet(): request_body = request.get_json() new_planet = Planet.create(request_body) db.session.add(new_planet) db.session.commit() return jsonify(f"Planet {new_planet.name} has been created"), 201

audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:26:17Z

app/routes/planet_routes.py

+@ planet_bp.route("/<planet_id>", methods=["GET"])
+def get_one_planet(planet_id):
+    planet = validate_planet(planet_id)
+    return make_response(jsonify(planet.to_json()), 200)


👍 Nice work!

Also, if a view function returns a dictionary (planet.to_json() in this case), Flask will automatically convert the dictionary into a JSON response object (aka Flask will turn dictionaries into JSON data for us). This means you can leave out make_response() like so:

@planets_bp.route("/<planet_id>", methods=["GET"]) def get_one_planet(planet_id): planet = validate_planet(planet_id) return planet.to_json(), 200

Here's the documentation with more info:
https://flask.palletsprojects.com/en/2.0.x/quickstart/#apis-with-json

audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:27:55Z

app/routes/planet_routes.py

+@ planet_bp.route("/<planet_id>", methods=["PUT"])
+def update_planet(planet_id):
+    planet = validate_planet(planet_id)
+    request_body = request.get_json()
+
+    try:
+        Planet.update(request_body)
+        db.session.commit()
+    except KeyError:
+        return abort(make_response(jsonify("Missing information")), 400)
+
+    return make_response(jsonify(f"Planet #{planet.id} successfully updated"), 200)


Nice work! We may want to consider validating the request_body data in a separate helper method.

audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:28:17Z

app/routes/planet_routes.py

+@ planet_bp.route("/<planet_id>", methods=["DELETE"])
+def delete_one_planet(planet_id):
+    planet = validate_planet(planet_id)
+
+    db.session.delete(planet)
+    db.session.commit()
+
+    return make_response(jsonify(f"Planet {planet.id} has been deleted"), 200)


👍 Comment about not needing make_response also applies.

audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:28:31Z

app/tests/conftest.py

+def two_saved_planets(app):
+    # Arrange
+    planet_one = Planet(name="Mars",
+                        description="Close enough",
+                        color="Red")
+    planet_two = Planet(name="Earth",
+                        description="we out here",
+                        color = "Green")
+
+    db.session.add_all([planet_one, planet_two])
+    db.session.commit()


audreyandoy · 2022-05-12T06:29:09Z

app/tests/test_routes.py

@@ -0,0 +1,73 @@
+#`GET` `/planets` returns `200` and an empty array.


Test routes look great 👍 !

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		from .routes import planet_bp
		app.register_blueprint(planet_bp)

		@@ -0,0 +1,73 @@
		#`GET` `/planets` returns `200` and an empty array.

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