Updated advice

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@@ -128,13 +128,13 @@ <h1>Advice for prospective students or interns</h1>
 
 <p><b>Q: I'm pumped. What should I do to make sure my email is read?</b><br/>
 
-A: Awesome.	Consider that faculty receives several cold contact emails per day
+A: Awesome.	Consider that faculty receive several cold contact emails per day
 and we cannot answer all of them. Most emails consist of a standard text that
 is copy pasted to all faculty at a school, maybe with their research area
 copy-pasted into the letter. Don't do this. If you want an answer, write a
-custom email. Explain why you like the research of a particular professor and
+personalized email. Explain why you like the research of a particular professor and
 how you fit exactly into their research group. Be specific and include
-details! Note that if you <b>use mail tracking images</b>, I will consider
+details and context! Note that if you <b>use mail tracking images</b>, I will consider
 your email SPAM and <b>delete your email</b> without reading it.</p>